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It was on a snowy day, that I saw you
You were walking home from training
I always watched you, and I still do
And yet, you never notice me.

I am like a snowflake and you are the sun
When I see you, I could faint
When you smile at me, I melt
And yet, I do anything to feel your warmth

You always told me 'Do your best'
I always turned a pretty scarlet
When you touched me, I fainted
But you were still there.

I'm like a rabbit
Small and Shy
You are the fox
Quick and sly

Oh what I do
just to be with you
Then one day when I walked passed
You kissed me like it would always last.
©2007-2009 ~VampiressAshe
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Author's Comments

It's a poem about how Hinata loves Naruto, and would love to be with him, but she can't tell him.

Hinata and Naruto are from Naruto, which is owned by Masashi Kishimoto.

But the poem belongs to me!

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:iconyuki-91210:
That rules!! ...did you get an insparation from me? =D

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J'aime DeviantArt!! C'est Genial!!!
:iconvampiressashe:
Yep! Only your's is based on Sasuke and Sakura, while mine is based on Naruto and Hinata. Poems is perfect for Hinata, isn't it?

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I am the moon!

Sunako Nakahara: She's cool!
Naruto Uzumaki: Whatever!
Me: Naruto, what did I tell you about extra ramen? And Gaara, who said you could have chocolate Ice Cream?!
Gaara: *Gulps then runs away*
:iconyuki-91210:
*nods* yes.

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J'aime DeviantArt!! C'est Genial!!!
:iconvampiressashe:
*smiles*

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I am the moon!

Sunako Nakahara: She's cool!
Naruto Uzumaki: Whatever!
Me: Naruto, what did I tell you about extra ramen? And Gaara, who said you could have chocolate Ice Cream?!
Gaara: *Gulps then runs away*

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